鳳凰舞

前幾日諗起淺寫一首詩,今日擺上網:

聆聽門有敲
鳳凰朝相望
立日心已飛
迎接亮雙翼
摸索擇窩棲
充交感鳴哮

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3 Replies to “鳳凰舞”

  1. 提一點小小的建議: 第一個字換成”聆”, 最後一個字換成”嘨”.

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